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new to the community [Jul. 23rd, 2006|09:52 pm]
runway four

drownthesun

[fiamma_celata]
a flower
alone
white among
grey light

a flame
crouching low
behind the fuel
of life

peeking
wanting
dying slowly

a wish
held dear
and soft
don't go away

before it's too late
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[User Picture]From: gunbladebby
2011-02-03 12:37 am (UTC)
This piece makes me feel lonely, and hopeful all at the same time. The visual of the flower is perhaps my favourite part of it all, and the personification of the flame is well to me, adorable in a way. I really enjoyed reading this. & sorry I couldn't be constructive in anyway, but I had to praise such a beautiful piece. Thanks for writing~
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